Tuesday, July 04, 2006

Some 5/3/5 Lunes <--Click here

1
Silver lightning streaks
in night sky
thunder fills the air.

2
Rose blossom flowers
hearts open
love is in the air.

3
Holding hands in love
always one
heart symphonies play.

10 comments:

samuru999 said...

That was wonderful!
Really enjoyed it!
Have a great 4th!

samuru999 said...

Oh, I forgot to mention I loved
the special touch with the colors.
You have such a great blog!

Don Iannone said...

Samuru...Thanks. Enjoy your 4th too. HUGE Tstorms here. It's nature's way of telling us...

A little color never hurts.

Dan said...

Little thunderstorms here last night, and the 'click here' works here and thanks for the primer on LUNES...
Remember the M80 on this day 45 years ago? And the fireworks out over the Ohio?

Imemine said...

Another convention. Another way to explore our creativity. Thank you for the introduction.

Kathleen said...

Beautiful Don... I love your Haikus! What rises in my heart when I read them is "freshness" itself taking form in beautiful images... I don't know that much about Haikus, but that seems to be thier inherent nature...

Have you ever thought of doing a book of Haiku poetry? Or have you already?

Happy freedom day...!

Pat Paulk said...

Don, thanks for the "lune" introduction!!

Don Iannone said...

Thanks Dan, Imemine, Kathleen, and Pat. Having some computer problems so have to keep this short. Hope to restore things soon.

Blessings.

Don

gautami tripathy said...

I follow the 3-5-3 words lunes!

I loved those!

Next time we both try villanelles!

Don Iannone said...

Gautami...thanks, and yes we should try the villanelles.

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