Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Short Poetic Breaths
By Don Iannone

1
wordless bliss
...found in the spaces
......where emptiness lives

2
eternity
...the length of any moment
......lived fully

3
love
...not a feeling or anything
......just your true nature

12 comments:

QUASAR9 said...

Hi Don,
A Magical burst of inspiration
Wishing you a Mighty fine day

Travis Jay Morgan said...

All three of these short poetic breaths are accurate and well said. Nice Job.

Dan said...

Yessir!

polona said...

just perfect, don!

dumbdodi said...

You are a dictionary of words of life
I specially loved 'eternity'...

Poetry by Kai said...

:-]

Kathleen said...

Yes... Yes... and Yes...!

Wonderful Don...!!!!

samuru999 said...

Perfect...
short poetic breaths!

Thanks Don!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like these- the first one is my favorite!

Don Iannone said...

Thanks Quasar, Travis, Dan, Margie, Polona, Andrew, Kathleen, Dumbdodi, and Kai. Appreciate your comments and glad you enjoy the poetic "gasps."

M. Shahin said...

Loved the words and the format of this poem. It really looks nice visually. The first one is my favorite. There is a lot to be found in the spaces...

Gangadhar said...

fantastic!!

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