An Adagio on Becoming One
By Don Iannone
Nothing left to live for
until you strip away the illusions,
and tumble down the hill to the very bottom,
where you learn to start over again.
Nothing real to live for,
as long as you cling to faded memories,
jutting up like rugged mountain peaks,
cutting deep incisions into dark clouds.
Nothing meaningful--until
the rain comes,
and washes away the stilted memories,
carrying you downstream--all the way
to where a sunny calm ocean appears,
making you one with life.
Thursday, August 31, 2006
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Great poem Don!
Thanks Margie.
"until
the rain comes,
and washes away the stilted memories,
carrying you downstream--all the way
to where a sunny calm ocean appears,
making you one with life."
Ahhhh... yes... So Beautiful Don... thank you!
Don
I meant to say the poem was
very beautiful,... such a blissful
feeling to it!
And thanks for it!
Ditto Kathleen.
Rain washing away the pollution
like spray water in the shower
washing away the heat and grime
the care & worries of the day!
Thanks Don.
Again a life-affirming poem. Thank you Don.
Incidentally 'Adagio'? Why that word?
Ah yes. Sounds nice read at an adagio-like cadence...
"...as long as you cling to faded memories,
jutting up like rugged mountain peaks,
cutting deep incisions into dark clouds."
Am blown away. What an acute picture for the soul
That is the beauty in life. Each day is a chance for renewal -- to wash away the old pains and look for hope anew.
Thank you Dan, Margie, Kathleen, Stacey, Quasar, Liz, and Rob.
Rob...I love adagios. Samuel Barber's Adagio for Strings for one. The adagio as you well know is a slow tempo with a direction. For that reason, it just seemed to fit.
yes, ditto kathleen.
love it.
Thanks Polona...glad you enjoyed it.
Love this poem. especiall these lines"to where a sunny calm ocean appears,
making you one with life.
Thanks Starry Nights. Glad you enjoyed it.
nice poem!!
Thanks Here and Now.
Always a rebirth!! Good one!!
Thanks Pat. Always is...you're right.
Nothing real to live for....great piece Don.
Another wonderful poem. "when you learn to start over again" We spend our lives startng over, don't we?
Thanks Dumbdodi and Serenity.
Speechless!
Thank you Gautami. Blessings.
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