Poetry in Search of Meaning
Don, this is good!If I might make one sugggestion, it would be to change "rising" to "rises".You did a wonderful job on this one! Spring and so much more captured in five lines!
Whoops! I mean, "rise", not "rises". :)
Aurora...Thanks. Made the verb tense change. I'll have to work at this.
first one! very nice --- I want to see more! :)
Thanks Aurora. Your nudge is moving in the right direction.Thanks Andrew. Stay tuned. Any suggestions would be much appreciated since you work with this form a great deal.
great stuff donalso interested to see how different your goldfinches are to the UK birds of the same name
Don, I love it!! I feed these boogers 10#'s of thistle a week. Small price to have them around.
oh, i love this one, don.and like floots, i'm quite amazed to see your goldfinches are from the european birds.
Beautiful!
Thanks Q, Polona, Pat, and Floots. Stay tuned. This is a new form for me, so we'll see...It's a nice change. Aurora suggested I move in this direction. I appreciate her nudge.
And a wonderful taiga it is!
clouds hitchhiking? i love it!
Don, this is good!
ReplyDeleteIf I might make one sugggestion, it would be to change "rising" to "rises".
You did a wonderful job on this one! Spring and so much more captured in five lines!
Whoops! I mean, "rise", not "rises". :)
ReplyDeleteAurora...Thanks. Made the verb tense change. I'll have to work at this.
ReplyDeletefirst one! very nice --- I want to see more! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Aurora. Your nudge is moving in the right direction.
ReplyDeleteThanks Andrew. Stay tuned. Any suggestions would be much appreciated since you work with this form a great deal.
great stuff don
ReplyDeletealso interested to see how different your goldfinches are to the UK birds of the same name
Don, I love it!! I feed these boogers 10#'s of thistle a week. Small price to have them around.
ReplyDeleteoh, i love this one, don.
ReplyDeleteand like floots, i'm quite amazed to see your goldfinches are from the european birds.
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Q, Polona, Pat, and Floots. Stay tuned. This is a new form for me, so we'll see...It's a nice change. Aurora suggested I move in this direction. I appreciate her nudge.
ReplyDeleteAnd a wonderful taiga it is!
ReplyDeleteclouds hitchhiking? i love it!
ReplyDelete