An Adagio on Becoming One
By Don Iannone
Nothing left to live for
until you strip away the illusions,
and tumble down the hill to the very bottom,
where you learn to start over again.
Nothing real to live for,
as long as you cling to faded memories,
jutting up like rugged mountain peaks,
cutting deep incisions into dark clouds.
Nothing meaningful--until
the rain comes,
and washes away the stilted memories,
carrying you downstream--all the way
to where a sunny calm ocean appears,
making you one with life.
Great poem Don!
ReplyDeleteThanks Margie.
ReplyDelete"until
ReplyDeletethe rain comes,
and washes away the stilted memories,
carrying you downstream--all the way
to where a sunny calm ocean appears,
making you one with life."
Ahhhh... yes... So Beautiful Don... thank you!
Don
ReplyDeleteI meant to say the poem was
very beautiful,... such a blissful
feeling to it!
And thanks for it!
Ditto Kathleen.
ReplyDeleteRain washing away the pollution
like spray water in the shower
washing away the heat and grime
the care & worries of the day!
Thanks Don.
Again a life-affirming poem. Thank you Don.
ReplyDeleteIncidentally 'Adagio'? Why that word?
Ah yes. Sounds nice read at an adagio-like cadence...
ReplyDelete"...as long as you cling to faded memories,
ReplyDeletejutting up like rugged mountain peaks,
cutting deep incisions into dark clouds."
Am blown away. What an acute picture for the soul
That is the beauty in life. Each day is a chance for renewal -- to wash away the old pains and look for hope anew.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dan, Margie, Kathleen, Stacey, Quasar, Liz, and Rob.
ReplyDeleteRob...I love adagios. Samuel Barber's Adagio for Strings for one. The adagio as you well know is a slow tempo with a direction. For that reason, it just seemed to fit.
yes, ditto kathleen.
ReplyDeletelove it.
Thanks Polona...glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem. especiall these lines"to where a sunny calm ocean appears,
ReplyDeletemaking you one with life.
Thanks Starry Nights. Glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeletenice poem!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Here and Now.
ReplyDeleteAlways a rebirth!! Good one!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat. Always is...you're right.
ReplyDeleteNothing real to live for....great piece Don.
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful poem. "when you learn to start over again" We spend our lives startng over, don't we?
ReplyDeleteThanks Dumbdodi and Serenity.
ReplyDeleteSpeechless!
ReplyDeleteThank you Gautami. Blessings.
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