Thunder Bay
By Don Iannone
North of Superior--
a quixotic place called Thunder Bay,
where Native spirits roam restless
throughout the night, that lasts longer
than the longest day.
Deep still water,
without bottom, goes untouched
like fresh wild berries spoiled
by the early snow,
drifting away like mysteries exposed
to the piercing white light
of early afternoon sun
on waveless gray-blue water.
The truth appears,
like wind on water,
then dives deep inside me.
Forever I am changed.
I think this is your best poem yet Don!
ReplyDeleteThis really moved me.
Eloquent: "a quixotic place called Thunder Bay,
where Native spirits roam restless
throughout the night, that lasts longer
than the longest day."
"The truth appears,
like wind on water,
then dives deep inside me.
Forever I am changed."
Very nice :-)
Thunder Bay in Canada? It is an interesting/quixotic place. Great poem!!
ReplyDeleteLasts longer than the longest day....
ReplyDeleteTruth appears like wind on water....BEST LINE
Beautiful poem Don
You poetry never fails to move me!
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful Don!
ReplyDeleteYep!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for your most kind comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem--inspired by a recent visit to Thunder Bay, Canada, which is beginning to show its fall colors.
ReplyDeletei love this one, don!
ReplyDeleteThe truth appears,
like wind on water
great lines!
Don,
ReplyDeleteNo matter the subject, your poetry moves me to "feel" every single line. Thank you for continuing to let the gift flow through you even through your busy times.
Blessings of peace, joy and Love!
How vivid! wonderful--
ReplyDeleteThanks all for your comments. Much appreciated. Best wishes to everyone.
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