Lightning Strikes in Early Morning Fog
By Don Iannone
Early morning
...before the sun and light.
Even before my conscious mind
catches up with its unconscious partner.
Dull wispy thoughts linger
...maybe from a dream, or
...just some syrypy residue
...from the day before.
It's quiet.
More so than usual.
I don't mind the emptiness.
It fills me in an odd sort of way.
Two days ago
...lightning struck very near us.
We felt small...and helpless.
It struck again this morning
...this time inside me.
I felt cleansed and free.
than u ......
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Good Kai. I am well also.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! Love the ending!!
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending also.
Thanks Pat.
ReplyDeleteThanks Samuru999.
Hey, and I love the ending myself.
Ah. So...
ReplyDeleteThanks Brother Dan.
ReplyDeletecame here from gautami's. Great great poetry. SOmething personal, exploring bigger meanings.
ReplyDeleteNice to have you and thanks for the comment. Blessings to you Ghost Particle!
ReplyDeleteI am glad I stuck around a bit longer after commenting on the poll, I love this poem, it is exceptional..'It's quiet.' yes, Yes, that is very filling, and enlightening.
ReplyDeleteThanks for a jewel early in the day.
You're welcome Jim. Sometimes I splip 'em in there...Thanks for the vote of support.
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ReplyDeleteImemine...natural violence? I agree it's not personal. Is it really violence?
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem Don...!
ReplyDeleteKathleen...thank you. Hope you are well.
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